We Wish You A Merry x3 And A Happy New Year.

At last the Christmas Holidays have arrived. Although its the holiday I am going to research information about the Digi-Pak and The Magazine Cover. Before I go today I'm going to ask Miss Thompson to look at my Music Video and give me some advice. Even if its a criticism I going to take it on the chin because I need all the advice I can get.

After looking at the video so far Miss Thompson's verdict is...

• It looks really good so far
• I think there needs to be more cuts
• To show a change in the three location maybe you should use a transition or even create scene whereby the cast are moving over to the next location.
• I can see that you have captured aspects of the Pop, R'n'B and Hip Hop Culture this shows that I have good knowledge and understanding in the research area of the coursework.
• The extra cast used in the club scene as well as their costume and make-up used on them doesnt look professional. In order to follow the genre of the type of music video you are trying to take I think this should be changed.
  

I've been able to take this on board so I guess after the holiday I'm going to do some work on that. I'll still be thinking about any changes I could make once I get back.

Anyway seen you soon.